” She drummed her fingers impatiently on the top of Sandrine’s cum-drenched head.
“Okay, I can see I’ve really been too nice about this.
I was just going to let you kneel there and finish up the last four. The greatest pussy eater in the worldright here.
But I can see you really need a lesson.
” Author’s Note This is the reimagining of an excellent story by Visioneer called Lucia Makes a Bet.
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Visioneer’s story is wonderfully written.
His characters are distinct and believable, he has a great feel for writing dialogue, the plot is put together well, and the story is entertaining if you’re into the reluctance category. Butkus dick steroid.
So there was certainly no need to re-write such an excellently composed story.
But I had an idea to take the story, the characters, and their dynamics and interactions in a different direct.
Visioneer generously extended his permission for me to do so. Adultchatroulett.
If you’ve not read Visioneer’s story you should (and if you are enjoying this story you will definitely enjoy Lucia Makes a Bet).
Especially for writers, reading the two stories will give you an idea of how essentially the same plot and characters can be taken in very different directions and made into two stories with very different feels, character dynamics, and story lines.